Main points:
-H1N1 is one of the most dangerous flu-People are dying because of this fluOpinions:I know that we've all heard about the Influenza A H1N1. This flu is quite dangerous. So far,the flu has spreaded to as close as Malaysia! People all over the world have been taking precaution about this flu. There are 86 deaths globally and 11 168 confirmed cases in 42 countries.
-This dangerous flu reminds peopls about the breakout of the Sars virus in 2003. There were more than 800 deaths due to the virus. In that year, all schools in Singapore were closed temporarily.The number of people infected by the virus is increasing by the day. More and more people have been taking precaution about this virus. Professors in the US have been trying to create a vaccine that could cure the Influenza A H1N1. I think that they must try their best to find a vaccine as soon as possible because the number of people infected with the flu is increasing.
-There are 86 reported deaths on Saturday. The Philippines became the 42nd country to report a case of H1N1 flu. Europe has taken stringent measures to stop the outbreak in its tracks, including the closure of high schools in Rome and placing soldiers in quarantine in Spain.Majority of the cases are in Mexico and the US. They are the responsible ones for the deaths and comfirmed cases of the Influenza A H1N1. Most of the family members of these people must be sad as their loved ones' lives are at stake. If Iwere the family members, I would be sad too. In time to come, I hope there is a vaccine to cure the Influenza A H1N1.
Good opinons but you should add more desription on the main points. That would be better.
ReplyDeleteGOOD EFFORT! :)
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btw comment mine 2 *Thx
ReplyDeleteGood opinons, u did described it but like wat Ichigo said, u really need to improve on the main points.
ReplyDeleteIsn't this almost the same as Dasuki?!
ReplyDeleteOkay, let me give you my opinions, which is same for Dasuki,
your opinion is fine. You can elaborate on how one should be aware of their personal hygiene and refrain from going overseas as the chance of getting the H1N1 virus increases. Singapore, like other countries, also did safety measures like quarantine passengers and having check-ups. This is very responsible of them. Singapore students are also taking their temperatures periodically so as to ensure no one is infected. The virus has mutated itself to be more immune to the human immune system, so it can kill humans. However, if everyone plays a part in ensuring their personal hygiene, I am sure that this disease would be curbed.
Right opinions. I agree, but it would be better if you add in more details about the news in your main points.
ReplyDeleteplease don't misunderstand.
ReplyDeletei did this article with dasuki so please don't say that he or me copied the article.
thank you for your kind undersatanding
dasuki and raphael.=)
okay, but you two should do it differently from each other.
ReplyDeleteErm, Raphael, you are reg no. 7 right?
ReplyDeleteThe opinion is good but maybe you can add a few things.
-Firstly, you can compare the H1n1 flu virus with the sars virus.
Which one is more deadly?
Which one spreads faster?
-What do we have to do to protect ourselves?
-What has singapore done?
-Do you think it is effective?
-Do you think the school holidays should be extended?
*What good or bad will it do to us?